Talk:Membership/Newsletter/2013/October

First picture caption

The caption for the first picture ("Richard Symonds setting up volunteer laptops when it first arrived.") is poorly worded, what would be better depends on what you was newly arrived:

• If it was Richard, change "it" to "he"
• If it was multiple laptops, change "it" to "they"
• If it was a single laptop, change "volunteer laptops" to "a volunteer laptop" Thryduulf (talk: local | en.wp | en.wikt) 12:18, 8 November 2013 (UTC)