2012 Annual Report/Design
This page is for comments, edits and feedback on the designed PDF of the 2012 Wikimedia UK Annual Report. The PDF is below. Please add in your views under the relevant sub heading for each printed page. Corrections and suggestions will be sent to the report's designer on Monday 16 April so we can get a second iteration of the designed report. Many thanks - and apologies if the formatting on wiki isn't perfect! --Stevie Benton (talk) 11:10, 12 April 2012 (UTC)
Page one (front cover)
Suggestion: Shaping, Sharing, Growing to be in our red, green and blue colours from WMUK logo --Stevie Benton (talk) 11:40, 12 April 2012 (UTC)
Page two (inside front cover)
Suggestion: Take all quotation marks our from the two messages. --Stevie Benton (talk) 11:40, 12 April 2012 (UTC) Correction: add 2011-12 before Chair in contents listing --Stevie Benton (talk) 11:40, 12 April 2012 (UTC) Suggestion: Change blackout header to "When Wikipedia went dark: the blackout" --Stevie Benton (talk) 11:40, 12 April 2012 (UTC) Update: Each image should have its specific license noted (SB to source) --Stevie Benton (talk) 11:40, 12 April 2012 (UTC) Correction: Add staff names and roles below board details. --Stevie Benton (talk) 11:40, 12 April 2012 (UTC)
Page three
Correction: add 2011-12 before the word Chair in initial heading --Stevie Benton (talk) 11:40, 12 April 2012 (UTC) Correction: Change Roger's opening sentence to "As Brandon says on one of our fundraising banners..." Suggestion: Vertically align Roger and Jon photos with the centre of their messages--Stevie Benton (talk) 11:40, 12 April 2012 (UTC) Correction: Change sentence in final paragraph of |Robger's message to "I'm particularly pleased that Monmouthpedia shows..." --Stevie Benton (talk) 11:40, 12 April 2012 (UTC) Correction: Penultimate sentence of Jon's message - replace "much" with "most". Also change this in the pull quote. --Stevie Benton (talk) 11:40, 12 April 2012 (UTC) Correction: Penultimate sentence of Jon's message - "volunteers" should not have initial cap --Stevie Benton (talk) 11:40, 12 April 2012 (UTC)
Page four
Correction: 7 board members graphic shows eight people --Stevie Benton (talk) 11:40, 12 April 2012 (UTC) Correction: Sept 2011 box - remove comma --Stevie Benton (talk) 11:40, 12 April 2012 (UTC)
Page five
Correction: First para, second column: "but this year" currently reads "but his year" --Stevie Benton (talk) 11:40, 12 April 2012 (UTC) Correction: Same para, next sentence: change sentence to "they are writers and editors."--Stevie Benton (talk) 11:40, 12 April 2012 (UTC) Correction: Same para, next sentence: remove first instance of the word "fact". --Stevie Benton (talk) 11:40, 12 April 2012 (UTC)
Page six
Suggestion: Change blackout header to "When Wikipedia went dark: the blackout" --Stevie Benton (talk) 11:40, 12 April 2012 (UTC) Correction: remove stray quotation marks on right hand of the page --Stevie Benton (talk) 11:40, 12 April 2012 (UTC)
Page seven
Correction: First column, second para. End of para to read "privacy and libel laws in outlets such as" instead of ending sentence. --Stevie Benton (talk) 11:40, 12 April 2012 (UTC) Correction: Second column, top para - Change "lead" to "led" and capitalise The Independent. --Stevie Benton (talk) 11:40, 12 April 2012 (UTC)
Page eight
Suggestion: Page needs an image. Perhaps Herbert Art Gallery and Museum? --Stevie Benton (talk) 11:40, 12 April 2012 (UTC) Correction: First column, top half - add [User:HJ Mitchell] to list of contributors. --Stevie Benton (talk) 11:40, 12 April 2012 (UTC) Suggestion: First column, second half - italicise Liam's intro. --Stevie Benton (talk) 11:40, 12 April 2012 (UTC) Correcetion: First column, third para - remove duplication of the word "is" --Stevie Benton (talk) 11:40, 12 April 2012 (UTC)
Page nine
Suggestion: Needs images! --Stevie Benton (talk) 11:40, 12 April 2012 (UTC) Second column, first line - insert word "College" after Imperial. --Stevie Benton (talk) 11:40, 12 April 2012 (UTC)
Page ten
To feature infographic currently being designed.
Page eleven (inside back cover)
Page twelve (Outside back cover)
Replace Nottingham address with Development House address as our registered address. --Stevie Benton (talk) 11:40, 12 April 2012 (UTC)
General notes
Correction: remove all full stops from pull quotes --Stevie Benton (talk) 11:40, 12 April 2012 (UTC) Suggestion: Can we replace some of the yellow with out brand colours? --Stevie Benton (talk) 11:40, 12 April 2012 (UTC)