Talk:Wikimania 2013 Report/Han-Teng Liao

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1. 'This is in stark contrast to the other two Chinese online Encyclopedias'. I'm not sure this makes sense in English.

In your Chinese article I imagine your readers will understand that you are comparing Wikimedia with the two min Chinese-language alternatives. An English reader won't have that frame of reference so I'd suggest you say something like

'This is in stark contrast to the two main Chinese online Encyclopedias' Mccapra (talk) 04:35, 10 October 2013 (UTC)


2. 'It involves not only technical development, but also a diverse set of measurements based on user experiment, feedback and actual data to ensure its success.' Not sure here whether you are saying that 'the process of developing VE' involved experiment, feedback etc. or whether you are saying that 'one of the benefits of VE is that it incorporates new metric tools which will provide WMF with feedback and data whenever editors use it.'Mccapra (talk) 04:44, 10 October 2013 (UTC)

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