Talk:Submission on Communications Data Bill

Please use this page for comments before 12pm on Thursday 23 August. Thank you. --Stevie Benton (WMUK) (talk) 16:10, 21 August 2012 (UTC)

"Chapter"

I think the "about us" section places slightly too much emphasis on our being a separate organisation from WMF, so much so that we might sound like a completely irrelevant organisation as far as Wikipedia is concerned. Is it possible to make that clearer? Deryck Chan (talk) 16:51, 21 August 2012 (UTC)

• Thanks - yes a fair comment - as this could use the skills of our Comms organiser who would reword that para better than I, I may defer to Stevie. Joscelyn (talk) 17:27, 21 August 2012 (UTC)

• • Hello - I've changed this point to read: "Wikimedia UK works closely with the Wikimedia Foundation, which is the body that operates Wikipedia." Should do the job! --Stevie Benton (WMUK) (talk) 12:56, 23 August 2012 (UTC)

Changes from Jarry1250

Since I worry that he's made these suggestions in a rather hidden manner that could easily by overlooked, please see [1]. Thanks. Mike Peel (talk) 23:27, 21 August 2012 (UTC)

Copyedit

I've made some copyedits and have undone them. To accept the copyedits, just revert the edit that undid them. (If too late, no worries.) --Andreas JN 10:48, 24 August 2012 (UTC)

Hi Andreas. The submission was made yesterday but thanks for trying to help. --Stevie Benton (WMUK) (talk) 10:55, 24 August 2012 (UTC)