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Please use this page for comments before 12pm on Thursday 23 August. Thank you. --[[User:Stevie Benton (WMUK)|Stevie Benton (WMUK)]] ([[User talk:Stevie Benton (WMUK)|talk]]) 16:10, 21 August 2012 (UTC)
Please use this page for comments before 12pm on Thursday 23 August. Thank you. --[[User:Stevie Benton (WMUK)|Stevie Benton (WMUK)]] ([[User talk:Stevie Benton (WMUK)|talk]]) 16:10, 21 August 2012 (UTC)
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I think the "about us" section places slightly too much emphasis on our being a separate organisation from WMF, so much so that we might sound like a completely irrelevant organisation as far as Wikipedia is concerned. Is it possible to make that clearer? [[User:Deryck Chan|Deryck Chan]] ([[User talk:Deryck Chan|talk]]) 16:51, 21 August 2012 (UTC)

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Please use this page for comments before 12pm on Thursday 23 August. Thank you. --Stevie Benton (WMUK) (talk) 16:10, 21 August 2012 (UTC)

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I think the "about us" section places slightly too much emphasis on our being a separate organisation from WMF, so much so that we might sound like a completely irrelevant organisation as far as Wikipedia is concerned. Is it possible to make that clearer? Deryck Chan (talk) 16:51, 21 August 2012 (UTC)