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== First picture caption ==

The caption for the first picture ("Richard Symonds setting up volunteer laptops when it first arrived.") is poorly worded, what would be better depends on what you was newly arrived:
*If it was Richard, change "it" to "he"
*If it was multiple laptops, change "it" to "they"
*If it was a single laptop, change "volunteer laptops" to "a volunteer laptop" [[user:Thryduulf|Thryduulf]] (talk: [[user talk:Thryduulf|local]] | [[w:user talk:Thryduulf|en.wp]] | [[wikt:user talk:Thryduulf|en.wikt]]) 12:18, 8 November 2013 (UTC)
**ps: In any scenario, perhaps change "volunteer lapop(s)" to "laptop(s) for volunteers" as the laptops themselves are not volunteering. <nowiki></pedant></nowiki> [[user:Thryduulf|Thryduulf]] (talk: [[user talk:Thryduulf|local]] | [[w:user talk:Thryduulf|en.wp]] | [[wikt:user talk:Thryduulf|en.wikt]]) 12:20, 8 November 2013 (UTC)
***Quite right, it now reads "Richard Symonds setting up laptops for volunteers when they first arrived." [[User:Richard Nevell (WMUK)|Richard Nevell (WMUK)]] ([[User talk:Richard Nevell (WMUK)|talk]]) 12:22, 8 November 2013 (UTC)

== Calls to action ==

It's good to see that this is keeping up momentum each month. :-) Can I suggest making the calls to action clearer, particularly in the email newsletters? I'd also suggest aiming to have one per section if at all possible. Thanks. [[User:Mike Peel|Mike Peel]] ([[User talk:Mike Peel|talk]]) 18:53, 8 November 2013 (UTC)

==Image sizes==
Has the problem with the images appearing huge in Outlook been fixed for this edition? (And before anyone asks, it's not me, my set-up is totally standard) [[User:Philafrenzy|Philafrenzy]] ([[User talk:Philafrenzy|talk]]) 00:59, 9 November 2013 (UTC)