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Please use this page for comments before 12pm on Thursday 23 August. Thank you. --[[User:Stevie Benton (WMUK)|Stevie Benton (WMUK)]] ([[User talk:Stevie Benton (WMUK)|talk]]) 16:10, 21 August 2012 (UTC)

== "Chapter" ==

I think the "about us" section places slightly too much emphasis on our being a separate organisation from WMF, so much so that we might sound like a completely irrelevant organisation as far as Wikipedia is concerned. Is it possible to make that clearer? [[User:Deryck Chan|Deryck Chan]] ([[User talk:Deryck Chan|talk]]) 16:51, 21 August 2012 (UTC)

*Thanks - yes a fair comment - as this could use the skills of our Comms organiser who would reword that para better than I, I may defer to Stevie. [[User:Joscelyn|Joscelyn]] ([[User talk:Joscelyn|talk]]) 17:27, 21 August 2012 (UTC)